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Kirby Writing Competition: Award of Appreciation

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Kirby’s Adventure : To the abandoned beachon Forgotten Land

By Bernadette Mok (P1, PLKCTSLPS)


On a perfectly sunny day, Kirby rode on a flying star to an abandoned beach on Forgotten Land where he had to compete an

adventure that his boss sent him.


He finally arrived at the abandoned beach. “WOW! What a beautiful place!” Kirby amazed. He put on his swimsuits and jumped into the water. “OHMY! Are you sure that is a normal crocodile?’’ Kirby asked himself. “OKAY! I will try to swim to the crocodile.’’ He said courageously. “OH! There is a star on the island where the crocodile is swimming around!’’ Kirby said. He went onto the island and hopped onto the star. When he haven’t even blink his eyes, and he got in a another part of the beach!


Then, he walked along the beach. “Cutter,fire, I will choose fire then”. He said. Putting on the new ability. All of a sudden, there’s an ENORMOUS troll monster in front of him! “Eekkkkkkkkkkk!’’ Kirby screamed. “But I will defeat him!” He said bravely. 7 minutes later, he killed the monster!


Then, Kirby walked into the cave. “Ghosts!?” Kirby shouted. “What happened?” A talking banana asked helpfully. Kirby was puzzled and confused. He even fell onto the mud! “BYE!” Kirby said to the talking banana. He walked into the cave again. But this time, he walked into the cave courageously. It’s dark inside, but when he came out of the cave, he was in a new world!


Kirby saw a round thing and he jumped inside. He became Kirby the drum! He can defeat all of the creatures he can see. He walked to another side of the bridge and there was a small boat! “I look so chubby but I can fit inside the boat!” He said. He got out of the boat and he found a cage with captured Waddle Dees!


Then he finally completed the adventure! He can go back to Waddle Dee Town finally!


- THE END -


 
 
 

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